Advice from section Writing 1A

I recommend you any things.
It was hard for me to write my blog 10000words and 15000words.It took me many long time to write it. So you should start to write it  in April. And second semester  is in August.

Also you should post 3 times in a week. For example, BR, Typing Homework and free-writing and so on. The free-writing is free. I wrote my friends birthday party, lunch, dinner, My favorite movie and so on. I added the picture. It was very interesting, so you can do it.

Also, you should write essay until deadline. You have to write essay in 3~4 times in 1st semester and 2nd semester. It is 600~900 words. It was very difficult. So you should write early it. But I could enjoy writing my essay because I wrote it with my friends. I think that you can enjoy doing it. Your partner is very important.

And you should ask your friends what you don’t understand. The Homework is sent to us in English. So I could not understand it. But some of friends can understand it. Whenever the Gmail was sent, I asked my friends.

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BR 2-27: Snowman Plan

"A snowman conotest" said Honry "Wow!!"   (p.6)

The book is Herny and Mudge story. They went to the park. There were many people, because snowman contest was hold in it. They took part in it. They made snowman each other. There are many kinds of it. For example, snowpeople, snowcats, snowdogs. And one person had built a snow Abraham Lincaln. It was very good.

I remember the snow festival. Snow festival is called Yukimaturi in Japanese. It is hold in Hokkaido. It is very famous in Japan. Many people go there. I have never been to the festival. When I was high school student, we could choice course of school trip. There were 4 course. Okinawa, Hokkaido, Nagano, Tokyo. I went to Nagano to ski. There were many friends who went to  Hokkaido. They said the festival was very beautiful. I watched the picture. I was very surprised. I want to go there next winter.

Cynthia Rylant. (2000). Snowman Plan. New York.

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BR 2-26: Down Rushing River

The lift has taken the children to the Wild Woods, where they meet Obby, the Obbygobulum (p.2)

When I saw the book, I though that this story is Urashima Taro. Because the book cover is look like it. The turtle carried children to somewhere. But it was difficult. The story is very strange.

Children ride the lift. It is very strange. The lift taken children to Wild Wood. They experienced many things in it. Then they met the turtle. He helped them many times. And he carried them to the life in the sea. It scene is book cover.

The story is fiction, but it is very interesting. Children like an adventure story. I want to ride the lift like the story. But I don't want to go to dangerous place. I want to go to the abroad, America, Africa, Europe and so on.

Kayu Umansky. (2001). Down the rushing river. England. Story Street

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BR 2-25: Volcanoe

The lava hardens into rock. Layers of lava build up after many eruptions (p.5)

I learned about volcanoes when I was junior high school student in science class. But I forgot many things. I know what the earth has an outer shell called the crust. And the middle of the earth is the core. But there are things that I knew for the first time in this book. It is hot water. A volcano heart up the ground around. So, it hearts up any rain. Heated water bubbles out and form a hot spring. I didn't know the structure. I watched hot spring water is used in swimming pool in Iceland on TV.

Also, I have to understand it. Because there is it in Kumamoto. It is Aso-zan. It is an active volcano. We can see it near. I have been to it. It is similar to this picture in this book. Also, there is Unzen in Nagasaki. It erupt in 1991. It was big.  Volcano ashes came to Kumamoto. When I was elementary school student, I went to Unzen as school trip. There is memorial hall in it. I went there too. I could learn many things.

I want everyone to learn volcano in this book.

Stephanie Turnbull. (2005). Valcano. London. Usborne

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Reflection of Writing Ⅳ

I had to write my blog 15000 words in second semester. I was very difficult. But there are BR, Typing HW and essay. Typing HW is My favorite. It was very interesting. Because my favorite things is easy to write. I wrote my favorite color, food, singer, bland, fashion magazine, and so on. But Typing HW have to write 100 words for 5 minutes. It was very fast. At first, I could not write the blog until remit. But I could do now. 

Also, I wrote essays. It was very difficult for me. Because I had to write 600 words to 900 words. We wrote essay of movie with my friends. We wrote about Angelina Jolie, Mr.and Mrs. Smith, Salt. We like her movie. So we choose her. The time was very interesting. We could write 800 words. I felt the essay was easier than other essay. 

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Reflection on Writing III

I was very surprised when I heard about Writing blog. I had never written 10000 words in English. I was very difficult to write a blog at first. It took me 30 minutes to write 100 words. But I could enjoy gradually writing the blog. I wrote interesting things. For example, a birthday party, shopping, trip and so on. And I attached the picture on the blog. When I read my blog, I can enjoy too. 

Also I was very difficult to write BR. At first I have to read a book. It was difficult to read it. Because there were many words I didn’t know. But I didn’t use the dictionary so much. I imaged the words from a title or illustration. When I could not understand the story, I used it. Also, it was very interesting to read a book I have read when I was  child. For example, Cinderella, Little marmeid and so on. It was difficult to introduce the story. Especially, the story I know was difficult. But the experience was very good.

And I could write 10000 words in August. I was very happy, but I had to write the blog 15000 words in next semester. 

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BR 2-24: Bear

Polar bear cubs are born in winter too (p.6)

This book introduce about bear. For example, their habits, the kinds of bear, about dens, their body. I like bear. When I was child, I often went to the zoo. Especially, I like a polar bear. They are very cute. But I often hear that bear attack people. I'm very sad. Some of there are people who don't like bear. This book tell us bear living body. It is very interesting.

At first, female polar bears dig dens in the snow. Their cubs are born inside the snow den. It is very warm inside.

Also, bears has different paws and claws each other. Brown bears use their claws dig up roots to eat. Polar bears' paws have grip, so they don't slip on the ice. Pandas have an extra bone in each paw. They use it to grip bamboo plants to eat.

There are many interesting things in this book. Also, the picture and illustration is very cute. You may have image which bears are ferocity. But I became to like them very much after reading this book.



Emma Helbrough.(2002). Bear. London. Ueborne

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